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What do you think about the lyrics?
Unfinished it is but need opinion.. Thanks in advance
Bloated up to fit it,
The hip hop destiny,
I'l b monstrous, heavy,
You can dream, i can be.
Show me how big i can be,
Hey mirror show me please,
I gotta plan up my house, one big enough to hold me,
Write down those plans dear, coz i keep forgetting.
Yeah writing these rap songs i can make you clap on yo al put your caps on hip hop is coming heads on hitting you in the chest and i'm gone so turn the bass on.
4 Answers
- Anonymous7 years agoFavorite Answer
I would add a little bit more too, it is a little sort. Also, I would suggest using a rhyme scheme, to give it a little bit more of a beat.
- 7 years ago
I liked these lyrics. But you said it's unfinished, right? I would love to see complete lyrics.
- Anonymous7 years ago
I liked it.. But it felt a bit generalized to me.. How about you try sticking to a theme?? That is great to listen to and also may help you progress faster coz it'll be a bit different.. :)
