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How do you like these ushaar of a Ghazal ( For hindi knowing Only)?
DARD
HUMNE APNE DARD KO SEENE MEIN DABAA RAKHA HAI,
AUR APNE DIL KO JAKHMON MEIN CHHIPA RAKHA HAI.
KAYUN MERE JALTE GHAR PAR PANI DALTE HO YAARO,
HUMNE PANI KO AAG SE BUJHA RAKHAA HAI.
CHAND GHADIAN AUR JEENE KI FARYAD KAYOUN KAREN,
HUMNE KHUD ZINDGI KO MAUT BANAA RAKHAA HAI.
PYAAS MAN KI DIN VA DIN BADTI HI JAATI HAI,
HUMNE KUYEN KO TALAB MEIN DUBA RAKHAA HAI.
HAR CHOT PAR NAYE DARD KA AHSAAS HOTA HAI,
HUMNE SIR KO THOKRON MEIN TIKAA RAKHAA HAI.
HUMNE DEKHI HAI AAENE MEIN SURAT APNI,
CHEHRA HANSI KE PARDE MEIN CHHUPA RAKHAA HAI.
"NIRASH' CHAHAT MEIN DHOKHA HAR KOEE KHAATA HAI,
HUMNE DHOKHE KO CHAHAT SE SAZAA RAKHAA HAI.
"Nirash"
@ Priya - wonderful appreciation. Your appreciation is more beautiful and touching than that oif my ushaar(Sher) of the ghazal. Thank you dear! lots of thanks.
JAKHAM ITNE GEHRE HEIN KI TALASHE NAHIN JAATE,
YAHAN PATHAR BHI NAZUK HEIN TRAASHE NAHIN JATE,
KAFAN ODNE KI AARZOO HO GAR "NIRASH"
BANTE GALIYON MEIN BATASHE NAHIN JAATE
"Nirash"
@@ Many many thanks for your beautiful appreciation.
NAZAR UTHA KAR DEKHA AANKHON MEIN SHRAB THI,
KAYA BATAYEN YAARO, APNI KISMAT KHARAAB THI.
BEBAKAT KI SHEHNAYEE NE PARDA UTHA DIYA,
TAAREEF JO KAR BETHE HUM UNKE SHAWAV KI.
"Nirash"
@@ Pavitra---Many many thanks for your beautiful appreciation.
NAZAR UTHA KAR DEKHA AANKHON MEIN SHRAB THI,
KAYA BATAYEN YAARO, APNI KISMAT KHARAAB THI.
BEBAKAT KI SHEHNAYEE NE PARDA UTHA DIYA,
TAAREEF JO KAR BETHE HUM UNKE SHAWAV KI.
"Nirash"
@@ Pavitra---Many many thanks for your beautiful appreciation.
NAZAR UTHA KAR DEKHA AANKHON MEIN SHRAB THI,
KAYA BATAYEN YAARO, APNI KISMAT KHARAAB THI.
BEBAKAT KI SHEHNAYEE NE PARDA UTHA DIYA,
TAAREEF JO KAR BETHE HUM UNKE SHAWAV KI.
"Nirash"
@@@ Priya Edit- No, no, never my intention was not like that. Really I welcome your appreciation and suggessions.I love your words. Thanks, a lot of thanks,
3 Answers
- ?Lv 67 years agoFavorite Answer
Nirash.......bht bht bht badhiya....................:)
each nd every line is sooooo gud.........bt I think these lines are best-
HUMNE APNE DARD KO SEENE MEIN DABAA RAKHA HAI,
AUR APNE DIL KO JAKHMON MEIN CHHIPA RAKHA HAI.
KAYUN MERE JALTE GHAR PAR PANI DALTE HO YAARO,
HUMNE PANI KO AAG SE BUJHA RAKHAA HAI......................:)
the attitude behind these lines brought a smile on my face..........vry vry gud.....................:)
- Anonymous7 years ago
Aapke har ghazal pighla deti hai dil ko.Kabhi khud ko parakhne ki avsar banti hai aapki lafsen toh kabhi chipe hue dard ko mehsus karati hai.
HUMNE DEKHI HAI AAENE MEIN SURAT APNI,
CHEHRA HANSI KE PARDE MEIN CHHUPA RAKHAA HAI.
"NIRASH' CHAHAT MEIN DHOKHA HAR KOEE KHAATA HAI,
HUMNE DHOKHE KO CHAHAT SE SAZAA RAKHAA HAI.
Yeh panktiyaan meri favourite hai:)))
Excellent work and keep up the good work Nirashji.Bahut bahut dhanyawad hamare saath yeh sundar ghazal share karne ke liye:)))
Edi:Nirashji,aapne toh bilkul meri bolti band kar di.And thanks for other two poems also.Thank you very very much for your appreciation:)))
