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Is it alright to say, ''A wary finger?''?

Is it alright to say -- He pointed with a wary finger.

Or --She stayed him with a stubborn hand.

Obviously, it is the people who are wary or stubborn. Just wondered if it was okay to write it this way.

Update:

Thanks for that correction, Ghost of Christmas Past. All education is grist to the mill and all right by me LOL.

Update 2:

Thank you, RAY G. I did not know that. The literary hand of Candy will now write more confidently.

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  • 7 years ago
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    Sure it is. In fact, this is a very excellent way of writing, because you convey both the action, and the underlying emotion of the actor at the same time. It's great economy of words.

  • RAY G
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    It's absolutely fine - but you need to be very sure how and when to use it.

    It's a literary metaphorical device called "transferred epithet" (see Wikipedia / Hypallage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hypallage ).

    "... The poor condemned English,

    Like sacrifices, by their watchful fires

    Sit patiently and inly ruminate."

    - Shakespeare, Henry V

    "As I sat in the bathtub, soaping a meditative foot ..."

    - PG Wodehouse

  • Bazza
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    Neither makes proper sense. Adjective needs attaching to the person not a body part.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    It's metaphor. Don't overdo it.

    PS It's not all right to say alright.

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  • 7 years ago

    The second one is ok but I think the first should be "He pointed warily with his finger".

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