Please read and c/c my poem? how do you like it?

Come, hold my hand and step into my dreams,

walk around in my mind wrapped in my thoughts,

don't look for stars or sunshine down that road,

come find me in those dark, dark black holes.

I will send my conciousness back on vacation,

Will lie sleeping for many many days,

You go around and enjoy the view,

this whole paradise was build for you.

Just a little request, don't scratch on the walls,

You will leave in few hours, but those will hurt for a while,

and don't turn left on 66th street,

There are rumors about a ghost who is obessesed about you.

I wish i could give you a map for dreamtown,

But it wasn't me who built most of the town,

there used to be a waterfall few days ago,

either it disappeared or froze up under fake snow.

I put a sun to keep you warm, rain for delight,

Night will be cold, just for the feeling you looking for,

I don't know for sure will you ever arrive,

but if you will, and won't find me,

Take a tour and while stepping out, just look back once before you go out.