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Will you read the synopsis of my book and tell me what you think?
Andorra (Andi) Shelley was a young woman with goals and absolutely no interest in the dating scene....Until a funeral and a summer job drove her back to Grimwood, the hometown she detested. Then Killian Humphrey comes along, an unusual, alluring young man who piques her interest, but Killian is a man with many secrets; the kind that no-one, not even Andi, can know. Against Andi's better judgement, she's slipping further under Killian's spell. Can she really trust him with her heart? More importantly someone is harassing her and stalking her. Someone doesn't want her to be with Killian, or anyone else. They want her for themselves, and they're willing to do anything to get her. Even murder. What will be Andi's fate?
If you're interested in actually reading the book, you can find the first five chapters here: http://www.wattpad.com/story/11767984-mortuary-man
I'll be adding more parts soon!
They are man and woman, not boy and girl, sorry Cammie. Andi is 21 and Killian is 23. The story just wouldn't work if they were younger.
That's fine Cammie, any criticism is constructive :) LOL
Nah, he's not in college, he's already following in his father's footsteps as the funeral director/mortician.
Also, I would like to read your story. ^_^
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- CammieLv 57 years agoFavorite Answer
It sounds interesting. I'd just change woman to girl and man to boy, unless they really are adults:) I'll definitely read it. Great synopsis by the way:)
Good luck and writing:)
-Cameron
Oh ok that totally makes sense, sorry for my confusion, young woman and young man makes me think they're around high school age. Maybe referring to her as a college student and him as a young man or vice versa (or a young college student). Just a thought, I don't mean to impose. It sounds like a great story, and thanks for the clarification:)
Oops he wouldn't be a college student. Do you mind if I give you revisions on wattpad. I'm usually pretty through so I didn't want to off as annoying/overly critical. I have a feeling it will just be little things:)
Source(s): Amateur mystery writer working on a series:) - 7 years ago
This certainly has an interesting play to it. I like that your using two unlikely characters and pulling them together. The way the story is matted with secrets should make for an interesting read. Especially with the mysterious stalker roaming about bringing danger to Andi. You should certainly keep going with this and see just how far you can take it. (:
- 7 years ago
I think it sounds really promising, I'll take a look :)
