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BHASKAR asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 7 years ago

please read and c/c my poem? how do you like it?

Just don't kill me or kiss me, soon enough,

unless you are afraid, of a coward like me,

you got the wand of life, can swing anytime,

but play a fair game, i won't cheat you, you don't cheat me.

I won't beat you, you don't cheat me,

an arrow at your headlevel, just won't kill you,

you've created me, the whole ******* world,

but my quest is your secret, how will you end all this?

A space free of topology, a space which could bend,

which you hiding in your pocket, ain't there no more,

don't look around, stolen by the best con man ever,

sold to Mr.reality, whom you killed thousand years ago.

It's just, all my friends are here, but you are not,

as omnipresent you are, still lost in realistic fog,

you try on your end, and i try on mine end,

may be you control the fog, but i will master in space and time.

No battle you offer, none i accept your baits,

a man to man challenge, shall we see in time, in future,

but it's the best fight ever, neither i can reach you, none you can fall down,

shall we compromise, before my drink go down and i raise my parker pen.

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  • 7 years ago
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    nice.....!!

  • 7 years ago

    Beautifu address to Almighty.

    Staza 1. I don't beat you- not admirable say I don't treat you.

    Last para last but 1 line- None you will fall down -write nor you will come down.

    Last line most beautiful " Shallbe compromise,before my drink go down and I raise my parker pen.

    Thanks.

    ever feel

  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

    I like it a lot but don't use wrong words.

  • I like it.

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