This is a true story poem? What do you think?

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Paranormal Activity/ a poem

I saw her again, 
She came to me.
Feeling sound of the ground, 
Runs towards me.
Seeing her ghost body 
Regrets all she blamed 
Sniper all I felt 
I became really scared 
With slap I became insane 
Thunder light all I see 
Her steps all I can feel 
No philosopher can explain
No proof to say Stop!
Looking at her leaving 
Moving the door of ceiling 
Wishing I could explain to her 
What's happening with me?
Left me a note in my heart 
Shine but glow quietly 
No explanation I could miss 
Wants to kill me everyday 
Her thoughts that flies away
Messing up my heart like flat 
Reasons of cloud mate 
Staring at far distance 
All I could feel resistance 
The room is black like dark 
Covering all the knock 
Sewing the things I gave 
Searching for clues I got 
Asking what I thought? 
Hurting people I love 
Leaving scars of slight 
Guess what ?
She visits me every night

Original poem made by me, Wallah all lies poet

Experto Credo · Accepted Answer

It comes off more as a series of disjointed thoughts, unless that is the effect you are searching for.

Julianna · Answer

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This is a true story poem? What do you think?

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