rate my lyrics?

Rap & Hip-hop is a passion, jack up ya earphones an wear my words on your head like the new fashion — trendy how you look but are you practical

Or are you just casual will you rip at the seams when your under tension

Or will you last, wear an not tear an keep on rocking until your pension

Or will you die along with the label you bravely protect

Your pocket is deep but is it full like u say so, dip my hand when you sleep but im feeling cautious

Lay low i whisper in your ear, disappear into the night am not raucous

But im dirtier than you(hugh) so stop playin boy

Cold sweats in the night cause you to wake

My shadow lurks past your peripheral

Thats besides the point cos your my new chew toy

Dont take it literal I mean lyrical

Metaphorically bombing ya like the world trade

Putting up blockades I dont even wanna be defrayed this aint no masquerade this is the realest **** I ever concieved its to late for me to be dissuade

Like a one two combo 93 damage output and 01 stamina lost

I stand firm as the last I remain I outshine ya’ll like gloss

Now listen to my hypnotic subliminals

Ill leave ya dead like you my sacrificial ritual

But I am consistent so dont show any resistence because its hopeless

Now, you can watch me as you lay there throneless

My brother got adhd buts a good kid

Lets go swimmin got a pool outside an im sick of listening to this wack ****