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can you make this sentence better? is there any grammar errors? Please HELP!!!?

can you make the below sentence better? is there any grammar errors?Does it make sense?? Please rewrite it better if you can. It's for a role point on my resume...

-Improved the language skills of ESL students, who had limited or no English skills, enabling them to be integrated into their mainstream classroom on a full-time basis

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  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

    improved language skills of my students, enabling these to pursue further education

    yours was a wee wordy, and shows the students did not get much good the education

  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

    Improved the language skills of ESL students appreciably and enabled their integration into the mainstream classes.

  • Lily
    Lv 6
    7 years ago

    Improved the language skills of ESL students, resulting in their transfers to mainstream classrooms

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