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Are these lyrics ok?

VERSE 1

My crown is imaginary, my whole world is fantasy, my whole life is a show.

No one can bring me down, no one can stop me now, oh this is my destiny.

BRIDGE

I will rule all by myself

Don't need to prove myself

Don't need you to take me home

I will survive in my own

CHORUS

I will be here until infinity, on the right side of insanity.

I will live in my fantasy, on the right side of insanity.

I'm not lost in the sky, I've learnt how to fly, you will never see me cry.

I will be here until infinity, and you can't stop me now.

Update:

Also if anyone has any advise for what I could do for verse 2 would be appreciated

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  • Ray
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    Graig, Are your lyrics okay? No, not if you want them to be good. They still need a lot of work. Here are 4 lines to help you out.

    My whole world, is one of fantasy

    Each day, is just a show

    There are some times, I'm feelin down

    But you will never know

    Source(s): myself
  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

    You're great.

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