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Elysabeth asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 7 years ago

Is this the way morning starts?

Roosters bustin loose,

East belling green clouds...

a red one off to the North.

One house light star-bursting

shaded radiance...

someone's wakin up,

coffee's on,

cat's scrounging...

I am alive.

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  • 7 years ago
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    That had a unique flavor that I had not tasted in a while. Good to have breakfast served like this, even if it is late afternoon...

  • 7 years ago

    Well, that is one way a morning starts. That's a nice, positive poem

  • 7 years ago

    Sounds like my place except for the roosters, mine is young bulls. Coffee is perking, smell drifting on the cool moist breeze.

  • bibian
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    That's a nice, positive poem......

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  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

    My morning starts on its own until i'm ready to GREET IT on my own terms. You's sounds way to complicated for me friend.

  • 7 years ago

    It certainly sounds the way many of my mornings begin, and while I sometimes grumble, I do say "thank you" for being allowed to wake. Thank you for the reminder.

  • Nat
    Lv 7
    7 years ago

    A free spirited and enjoyably lyrical write.

    You express emotion with simile and metaphor

    well. I like many of your one line / end-cap endings.

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