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Is this a good poem?
Swimming lessons
The world is an ocean
Some will sink too the bottom
Some shall rise above
Few can see the lights of heaven
Most drown in misery
And the best don't need oxygen
5 Answers
- ?Lv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
It is a good poem, if fallacious..poetic licence reigns
and so,,everyone gets wet!.LOL
- Anonymous7 years ago
Some will rise above. Bury the shall in a deep hole.
- ThomasLv 77 years ago
Take the "And" off the beginning of the last line
and you have a potent piece. Very good.
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- Anonymous7 years ago
It is Ok type..
It needs some more flow in d language. .
