What do you think of this? It's for a date...?

Thank you for clicking, here's the situation:

Known this woman a couple years, only in past 6 months or so that our feelings have warmed up. It's a change in our previous relationship, and I want her to know it's a strong change, not a casual, marginal one. Know she likes idea of being 'courted' (everyone's allowed a pet fantasy, and it's part of her loveliness! Will only 'declaim' poem if date goes well:

If wishing made it so.

I wish that thoughts were sounds, so you could hear me when I thought of you.

I wish that longing had a scent, so you could breathe my wanting you.

I wish that caring had a face, so you could see me when I lived for you.

But some kind spirit, a gentle heart, granted these wishes long ago. For if we touch, you’ll feel the love I wanted you to know.

Too cheesy? Too pathetic? Too needy? Badly written? Please help!