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Jaydi asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 6 years ago

Do you like this song?

She stood so tall,

that smile,

She'd grinned like that,

for a while.

but those eyes told me,

the whole truth,

She was saying to me,

oh

Why is this me

The story of me life.

Why was I born?

I wish I could die,

Because I hate

The hate that people hateme with,

like....

One day I didnt see her,

It turned to a week.

My heart beat,

as possibilities,

came to my mind,

is she alive?

is she alright?

Her face was a mask

Her eyes were so sad.

And then she walked in the room,

She looked so bad,

And I smiled at her,

but she didnt smile back ,

Something was up,

I knew that,

She rolled up her sleeve,

I saw crimson cuts

Boys called her a *****,

and an attention seeking ****,

but she has so much in life

It would be alright,

I wish she knew,

Before the hospital room,

I was taking the shortcut,

Through a cemetery,

But I saw a name,

that stood out to me,

I remembered the smile,

the eyes the cuts….

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  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    Don't listen to them! Your song is beautiful and deep it has meaning to many people. Keep working on it write it and rewrite it and rewrite it until it's perfect! You are amazing and so is your song! Keep writing!

  • 6 years ago

    I do not. I have a much lower tolerance for generalized complaining by young people than the average person and no tolerance at all for young people complaining in a poetic manner. Maybe those who enjoy young people complaining in a poetic manner will love it.

  • 6 years ago

    Wow.....that's deep 👍🏼 but I kinda like it

  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    I got cancer from that

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