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poem any good?

our ancestors work is still in the air

like storm clouds that are always there,

The sweat and blood left behind from generations ago,

leave stained images on my high rise window,

dead but not forgotten.

they linger around like little children around a merry go round

tightening its grip on the world like morning glories in the spring morning dew

or even going with roast beef like some french au jou

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  • 6 years ago
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    I love French Dip so your pome rocks

  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    Your poem rock.

  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    Our ancestors work still in the air,

    Like storm clouds always there,

    The sweat & blood from past generations,

    Imprint stained images on my window,

    Dead not forgotten,

    They linger like children in the merry go round(:-\ )

    Tightening its grip like spring morning dew,

    Or goes with roast beef like French au jou

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