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my poem any good?
Love is just a bug
The sun is bright and warm
snug under a rug
leaves turn up before a storm
love is safe and secure
june bugs sing in mid days heat
I scour the earth for more
giving birth to songs others may repeat
love is just a bug in stormy spring heat
1 Answer
- Anonymous6 years agoFavorite Answer
I am average at poetry, so I don't know what others will say but my opinion as an literary lover, its short and beautifuly written. The words are beautifuly selected. And it just seems perfect! The message is conveyed so perfectly. The poetic devices as far as I can say have been well used. My advice:
you should write more :D
Source(s): .... my mind i guess?