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poem any good?

love whispers in the night

shadows moving in sight

rain drops beat on your head

its just a skunk under my shed.

cotton pillow on your face

just to be awoken again by loves sweet embrace

stagger again down the stairs

only to see a smelly skunks stare

back to the room I creep

wondering if i will hear my loves pleasant peep

love calls once more

this time i have left the shotgun by the door

with the soft grass between my toes

will this poem ever end who knows

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    Lv 4
    6 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    You used skunk twice

    yet left it out of the couplet

    Pepe La Pew roll of the dice

    a poem or/of debt

    what a perfume

  • 6 years ago

    Good is subjective, but you didn't post this expecting praise, knowing that you spent your time and ours with this???

  • 6 years ago

    Grass in your bed ? I d scrap that bit

  • 6 years ago

    This was the worst thing I read in my life, retire already

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