Is this rap I wrote good?

It all started when I ran away from home

Running to the city like a Catholic to a church in Rome

Slit a cops throat and dragged him on my boat,

Skinned him like a goat and took his ******* coat

Met a dude who goes by James,

Said "I'm done playing games, I don't know anyones names"

So he took me down the park, just after dark

Introduced myself, "Hi, I'm and it's nice to meet ya, I'm from East

Bridgewater and we should get a pizza"

Had my first beer, wow that's pretty queer

Skinny kid tells me I don't belong here, made it perfectly clear

Reached for my knife and cut off his ******* ear

Stomped on his head and now he's in the hospital bed

"Miss O'Connor, your son is dead"

Two days later I hear a few Feds,

I look the other way and escape without delay

But you know this is just child's play, anyways

Some of them think "Oh, he lived in a small town for five years,

What's this kid doing here? He must be a ******' loser and he's definitely not

A bruiser, so let's make **** awkward and shove him in a locker"

Maybe true until you put me in a rage

I'll kill your mother or rape her in a cage

I'm not that tough but interestingly enough

I'll give you a good snuff, just keep running your mouth

And you'll end up in Tuft's

Note: I know some of the words are sick, some of this is based on a experience of mine but exaggerated heavily for shock value. I don't want to become a rapper I'm not one of them this was just for fun