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I am doing an Exteneded project qualification and I need some help...please help me out! :)?

I have written my intro and I would like some help on two things:

1) Is the intro ok? Do I need to add anything else?

2) How would I start my main body for the essay/dissertation?

Chosen question: "HOW DOES MEDIA IMPACT TODAY’S VIEWS ON ISLAM?"

Intro:

"You have heard of the saying “don’t believe everything you read” right? Well, there are a collection of people that do believe everything that they read. Their ability to be fooled poses a question in my mind - “How impactful is media?” With the current state of the world, I would be naive to say that Islam is not being slated every day for the acts of a few. Many are being impacted due to the actions of extremists – some lose their loved ones, others are brutally injured and a number of people are emotionally tortured. In this dissertation I wish to see how media has played a role in this. I wish to see how they have played a role in the increase of islamophobia.

I will delve into the opinions of the general public – with the aid of primary research and the voices of many I will be able to look into what the people of the United Kingdom have to say about this very controversial topic. I will search the web looking for content – reading comments and accumulating a variety of sources to allow me to form an unbiased judgement on the matter. Where there is good there is bad, as a result I will also search for if media has helped to reduce the rise of islamophobia. I expect to see a mixture of the two responses."

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  • Mark
    Lv 7
    5 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    I'd change "how impactful" to "what is the impact". (Impactful is a word, but it's a rather clunky one.)

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