Does this sound ok?

I am scared to walk down the street,

I am terrified that some person will come up to me

Telling me I'm beautiful, whistling at me, or commenting on my appearance, when they don't even know me

I have given so much of myself away so I wouldn't have to live with this,

I gave up my legs,

'Cause God forbid I shave them, and when I wear my skin tight leggings, that drift to my knee after I do shave them,people yell,

'Well, damn, I would bang that viginia.'

I gave up my butt,

'Cause God forbid I wear a pair of booty shorts,

Or I will hear,

'I would love to see you shake that thang'

I gave up my boobs

'Cause God forbid I show to much of them

Or else I will hear,

'You are a slut.'

I have given up the confidence, to show who I am threw what I wear,

Because when I am showing myself,

All I hear are hurtful things,

Like how someone would love to bang me, but trust me the only way you will ever enter me is by using force, I will fight back, like how someone wants me to dance for them, but the only way I'll dance for them is threw the art fighting, I will be called a slut, when I hear that all I want to say is,

'Maybe I am a slut, maybe I'm not as innocent as everyone thinks I am but what does that have to do with you. What if I am a virgin, what if I'm not, what does that have to do with you.'

This is not ok and it needs to end.