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Giermin asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 5 years ago

What do you think about my poem !! this is for my class homework?

The Hot Dog!!

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It is everyone's favorite dish

because it taste so delish

it is something big and red

sometimes it is cold, hard and dead

but it is best when it oiled

or when hot and boiled

but thing that make me please

when the is inside is full of cheese

it is something love by everybody

even though it bad for the young body

it is hard to resist its pleasuring flavor

every bite and smell; it is a pleasuring savor

sometimes it is big and sometimes small

but no matter what size,i love them all

it is made from a fine hog

and it is called a hotdog

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    Lv 7
    5 years ago

    It is alright but fix these lines before handing it to the teacher.

    but the thing that makes me pleased

    is when the inside is full of cheese

    it is something loved by everyone

    even though it is bad for the young

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