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What kind of grammar error the sentence have? " Walter became Mack's partner after he moved to Iowa".?

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  • MaryB
    Lv 6
    5 years ago

    It's not possible to tell who moved to Iowa. Rewrite the sentence: "After he moved the Iowa, Walter became Mack's partner."

  • 5 years ago

    What kind of grammar error does the sentence have? It is unclear who "he" is, Mack or Walter.

    A possible correction: Mack became Walter's partner after Walter moved to Iowa.

  • Jack
    Lv 7
    5 years ago

    Punctuation. Context might also apply. But as it stands there is no great error. Most reading it would understand the general intent.

    Remove a space. Alter the punctuation.

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    Seems fine to me, but let others confirm.

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