Grammer, and verbiage.?

Good Evening Ms. Price,

On Tuesday, November 29, I briefly spoke with you about an internship at Sound Images. You mentioned that a meeting with the Lead Audio Engineer could be set up. You also requested an email from me so that you could forward it to the appropriate person at Sound Images. That would allow the company to send me additional information about the internship.

I appreciate your time and assistance in regards to this remarkable opportunity.

Sincerely,

Cameron Tye

NOTE: make sure you have the correct date in the letter.

NOTE: unless you know Samantha personally you should use Ms. Price.

NOTE: you do not need the sentence part stating "any position will be greatly appreciated." since

you say that at the end of the letter.

Good evening Samantha Price,

I spoke with you briefly yesterday inquiring about interning at Sound Images; any position available would be greatly appreciated. You mentioned you could set me up with a meeting with the Lead Audio Engineer , and requested an email from me; this one it can be forwarded to them .

If more info is needed please advise.

I appreciate your time in assisting me with this remarkable opportunity.

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Good luck!

The word is GRAMMAR, not GRAMMER, you idiot.