Is it too late for a Valentine?

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STUPID CUPID
(a Valentine’s poem by LCF 2016)

Your arrows are dull little boy
Your bow is now merely a toy.
Can’t kill a dove
Much less inject love
Into a heart that you aimed to destroy.

Your shot fell too short to stick in
Love without forgiveness, a sin.
Your silver lined puffs
Smashed into the bluff,
Diverted by sudden cold winds.

Cease fire! This heart you’ll not pierce;
Its shell has grown thick, its beat fierce.
No longer played fool
Or slave to love’s rule
The storm ends, the sky at last clears.

the cheese whisperer · Answer

While it's true that my arrow is dull
And you've grown a bit thick in the hull
Don't give up just yet
You've a soft-spot, I'll bet
So the next time... I'll aim for your skull.
:)

pretty asian girl · Answer

Nope

Caz :) x · Answer

Thank God it's not just another Roses are Red lets fluk with your head poem .
Love gone bad,   ''makes this a different take on valentines day .   
Exhalent poem LC  .

Coop 366 · Answer

Never to late for you to say "I love you!" in your way.

? · Answer

I read this before.
it is so good I'll remember it forever.
It is a great insult against Cupid.
You can post this every month until it sinks in.
I rate it an 8 cause its great.

? · Answer

For you LC, it's never to late.  In fact, 24/7/365 with maybe one day off........ha ha

This was one of your best with a cadence that was nearly symmetrical, and an
ideal rhyme pattern that added humor to romanticism.   Love is love, but sometimes
it's not the right love, because relationships take more than love, even friendships.
I love you.   Best always and in 2017.    Thomas

? · Answer

Not too late at all...especially for a message this strong and pure! x

Anonymous · Answer

Yes

Doctor P · Answer

If you have a will, you have a way.

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/where-there-s-a-will-there-s-a-way

Anonymous · Answer

Hmm! Naa, for 2018 you've got plenty of time

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