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Just a poem. What do you think?
In Everyone
He waits
hands stained with blood
hiding his soul
from civilized people
He watches
the innocent pass
hating their ease
He seethes
wanting their death
to kill their dreams
to destroy their lives
He wants nothing
but the rush of
their terror
It turns him on
it makes him happy
His mind is twisted
his soul is broken
and he breathes
the breath of death
He is in the heart
of everyone.
4 Answers
- 4 years agoFavorite Answer
Like isn't a sense I have about this, though I think it's well presented. I'm into James Patterson books at the moment, and this sounds a lt like a sub plot / character of his writing.
The final two lines may hold more truth than many realize. Do me a favor, no offense, you need not use the word "Just This is a thought out, free verse poem, albeit about a tormented soul.
- 4 years ago
Soul - is in truth the Spirit and Body of man.
It turns him on- Gives him satisfaction.
It makes him happy - It makes him content.
- ?Lv 64 years ago
It's good at showing the dark side in people. Maybe try to add some figurative language and personification to it so it doesn't sound clichéd.
- Anonymous4 years ago
It sounds out of this world.
