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How can i write this scene descriptively?
One woman is at a bar, she is clearly alone and sad to be alone. Then another woman walks over and starts talking to her. The woman sitting at the bar reveals she is a lesbian.
How would i start this scene. I can write dialogue fine, i just don t no how to set this scene up.
Could anyone give me examples on how to do this?
1 Answer
- Be an AngelLv 64 years ago
either my standards for writing are really low, or you just remove a "then" and add the name "Sarah" to what you wrote
"One woman is at a bar, she is clearly alone and sad to be alone. Another woman walks over and starts talking to her. The woman sitting at the bar reveals she is a lesbian and her name is "Sarah" <then instant dialog>
"I was watching you page through that magazine and I was touched at the way your eyes moistened when you saw the Geico Gecko", "oh, so thin, and so giving... If only people saved just 10% with Gieco the Gecko would be stronger, more hearty, I feel it is saving people perhaps too much money, working perhaps too hard." She fumbled for the magazine, her hand brushing mine...
