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dingdong asked in Social SciencePsychology · 2 years ago

Correct punctuation if needed?

And you feel better about yourself and life just being around them. And by the way, they think in this positive way that's moving you toward your goals and it's rad. So that was the shift, and then it was like, once you get that first taste of, whoa, this person is making me a better version of myself. I want to be around other people like this. And I want to be that for somebody else. I want to light them on fire and be like, yo, you can do this, we got this! And that fits so well with my natural personality of I love seeing other people win. So it was such a sketchy place for me to be where I was, I felt bad about myself if they were better than me. But yet, I wanted them to win. It was super weird. So you just have to change what you build your self-esteem around.

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    I actually like the And part, l think I’ll use it

    More myself.

    Thanks

    Very Best Wishes

    Mars

    Source:) Personal views cited.

    And Ethics affirmation of the minority.

  • Eva
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    You don't begin a sentence with "And". Your sentence that starts with "So" is a run on sentence, makes no sense, and has unnecessary words and commas.

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