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Is it okay to write like this?

"Although I did not choose to pursue university life, I decided to start a career first in order to get acquainted with my skills and interests. Once I got familiarized with my abilities I decided that it is time to enroll in university."

Update:

Can you please help me to make it better?

It is for essay, and is part of introduction.

Update 2:

and can I add in the end,

"Hence, I decided to apply to University of ABC"?

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  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    Do you know what "although" means? It means that something unexpected occurred. If you don't go to university (oops, I mean "choose not to pursue university life" - never use one word when five will do) one would expect you to get a job (sorry, I mean "decide to start a career first in order to get acquainted with my skills and interests.") I think it's just lovely that you got acquainted with your interests. Indeed, only a churl starts a career for money or security. The real reason for getting a job is to get acquainted with one's interests. "Hello, I'm your interest in pornography. Glad to make your acquaintance."

  • ?
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    Yes, but you will see one alternative in the answer to your similar question.

  • 2 years ago

    Thank you everyone :D

  • 2 years ago

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  • 2 years ago

    It's over-formal, and as so often happens when people try to be too clever, it fails.

    Make it simpler, and follow what John P suggested. In addition, change the tense of 'is' in the last sentence:

    ... I decided that it WAS time to ...

  • Anonymous
    2 years ago

    The use of "Although" at the start is wrong, in front of a bare statement such as "..., I decided to.....".

    And "Now that I have become familiar with the work that I do, I have decided that it is time to...." Actually my idea is almost as awkward as your notion, but yours is definitely wrong.

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