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Which speech would you be more interested in hearing on the topics of connection and excellence?
(1) Connection Creates Excellence;
(2) Connect To Excel;
(3) Connection is the Bedrock of Excellence
Please vote and feel free to make suggestions! This is for a one hour speech to be given to businesspeople in the midwest US at a one day conference whose topic is "Excellence."
1 Answer
- JeffLv 61 year ago
How about “Connect to Excellence”? Much more intriguing and a slight play on words.
Honest feedback:
1) Gives away your final points and honestly makes it sound boring.
2) I instantly thought of spreadsheets and a technology training.
3) Again this doesn’t create any intrigue but it’s better than the first title. The term “bedrock” feels outdated and/or too much. “Foundation” would be better, but overall I still wouldn’t use it on the basis that it doesn’t generate interest.
Having an intriguing title is beneficial for anyone. Your audience is more likely to show up and listen more intently, and you can use the theme to pull them in at the beginning.
To rule of titles: Bring the audience in with something they want, then give them what they need in the content.
Your audience is obviously people who aspire to be excellent, and you’re trying to convince them that connections will help them to do that. Here’s what they want:
Connect to Excellence
