Chaplin

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=44j85b6NQIY

Any comments, good or bad welcome. First thing i'd like to point out...I am aware that there are some obvious flaws, like the music cutting out a bit sharp, but with the resources we had, we really did our best! :P

It hasn't been graded yet, so if you'd like to give it a grade, i'd appreciate it:)

It's experimental really, it might not look as pristine and well crafted as good stories should, but I enjoy creating shorts and just trying out different ideas. I made a wattpad account a while ago but never really used it...i posted it on but no ones viewed, not really sure how to promote it on their, haha

Feedback would be appreciated!:)

www.wattpad.com/mystories?compose=true&id=71721128

Firstly, is there anything I'm missing on my CV? I have my contact details age etc, I have work history, educational history, hobbies and interests, personal profile and references. Anything else I should have?

Secondly, I know you shouldn't really have a fancy design for the CV, but is they are any font type/size that is considered desirable? Seems random but I want it to be perfect...

I've been told CV's shouldn't be more than two pages, is it bad if I have one page and a half? I say this because the second half of the second page is just empty space...should i try and add more to make up for it?

For the hobbies and interest section, would it be a good or bad idea to mention online courses (open2study) you don't get any qualifications from it, but I thought it might make me look like I do extra work. I already have sporty stuff and the generic sort of hobbies, so I thought something else was needed to make me seem more interesting...

How much detail should I go into when describing job roles on employment history? Should I mention what skills I learned or used in these roles?

If you could post your CV that we be greatly appreciated, I'm not gonna copy I'd just like to see if mines not completely rubbish! I already have a job but I'm searching for something else.

Thank you:)

And what do you think of mine?:)

25- Girls- Beastie Boys- 81 plays

24- Lake Of Fire- Nirvana- 84 plays

23- Silver Dagger- Joan Baez- 87 plays

22- Sic- Sliipknot- 89 plays

21- Adams Apple- Aerosmith- 89 plays

20- They Long To Be (Close to you)- 90 plays

19- Rid Of Me- PJ Harvey- 91 plays

18- Northern Star- Hole- 96 plays

17- Love Is Surrender- Carpenters- 100 plays

16- Come Softly To Me- The Fleetwoods- 101 plays

15- Everyday Is A WInding Road- Sheryl Crow- 102 plays

14- I Think That I Would Die- Hole- 104 plays

13- You Know I'm No Good- Amy Winehouse- 105 plays

12- Rhymin' and Stealin'- Beastie Boys- 121 plays

11- Hollywood Nights- Bob Seger and the Silver Bullet Band- 128 plays

10- Grace- Jeff Buckley- 133 plays

9- Pretty On The Inside- Hole- 140 plays

8- Plump- Hole- 141 plays

7-Plateau- Nirvana- 143 plays

6- Doll Parts- Hole- 162 plays

5- Heart Of Glass- Blondie- 165 plays

4- Killing In The Name- Rage Against The Machine- 170 plays

3- Smells Like Teen Spirit- Nirvana- 180

2- Africa- Toto- 317 plays

1- Violet- Hole- 454 plays

and if so...what would you recommend doing?

and if so...what would you recommend?

I'm still a first year at college, I just thought about age differences and studying in America..

I was thinking just one big one of a Ferris wheel with something in the background, but thought that might be quite strange..

Any suggestions?

add me if you do!:)

Roundhouse95

and a merry xmas to you!:)

I have had a plain boring haircut for a while...feel like i need a change but I wouldn't know how to ask for a styled haircut...would it be weird to print a picture and bring it in? if not...can anyone recommend me a site with some good ones on? thank you:)

BQ- Who is your least favourite?

BQQ- Which champ do you not like to go up against?

Or could I teach my self with books and videos etc. I'm 18 and I have wanted to play an instrument for so long....but I don't really have the money for lessons and I have two jobs and 5 days at college so I don't really have the time for lessons. Could I self teach? Is it possible? I own a keyboard and I'd also love to play the saxophone...

BQ- has anyone else's Yahoo changed or is something wrong with my laptop? It's really not very good....

I want to do it on teenage pregnancy not being acceptable, is it too cruel? We usually have to do peer evaluation, and if someone's parents had them as teenagers or they are close to a teen whose pregnant..I feel quite strongly about the subject though, and I feel i could write a good piece of work on it....

"The trees stood sentry around the house" It's supposed to be the trees being like guards...should I just use "guard" My teacher questioned it but she wasn't entirely sure...

What was it?

What does it say our compatibility is?

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