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Little Wifey
"All that is gold does not glitter, not all those who wander are lost; the old that is strong does not wither, deep roots are not reached by the frost. From the ashes a fire shall be woken, a light from the shadows shall spring..." ~JRR Tolkien
Whats so complicated about it? - Rate my poem?
Whats so complicated about love anyways?
She wants a Pony
She wants a diamond Ring
She wants a seat on the city council
She wants more money
She wants more things
She wants checks that wont bounce till
Nothing matters anymore
He wants a boat
He wants a promotion
He wants peers to Supervise
He wants expensive coats
He wants wheels in motion
He wants fire in her eyes
Does anything matter anymore?
Would it hurt to smile at a tired crack head?
Would it harm anyone to choose love instead?
Why must man always judge and delight
in rationalization, blame vampires bite...
Can anyone change the world anymore?
Or is she just a consumer capitalist whore?
Is there anything left to save?
The road to destruction each man doth pave
And yet where there is one, there may be two
Perhaps just me
Perhaps just you
Mercy is born of compassion and favor
The human condition we all must savor
This moment....short and sweet
Eventually our savior we all must meet
If it were a marathon in which we all hold hands
Beside us each seed planted firmly stands
Would you count a few, or none at all
Would you slump forward, or stand tall?
Lets say you don't think God is there...
Would you to Buddha have something to share?
Love is a bridge where we all can meet
A fruit by which we all could eat
What is so complicated about Love anyways?
We could use a little more now-a-days...
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWould you say Dr Seuss was a Poet....?
or a Storyteller, or a Writer, or all three?
Or do you think he was something else all together?
I adore the Dr Seuss books and read them to my children often....there is so much MEANING under the surface!
12 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoEver want to chew nicorette gum even though you never smoked?
Just curious....
11 AnswersPolls & Surveys1 decade agoWill you read my Poem - Replenished Heart - Happy Easter?
Made New
Under the Sun
Replenished Heart
Healed by The One
Slow Death
Scarlet trails fall
Heavens Tremble
Seven Trumpets Call
Hallelujah
King of Kings
Lifting the Shadow
The Flesh brings
Debt immeasurable
Give Thanks
Awesome Impenetrable
Holy Things
Hardly Comprehend
This Sacrifice for me
Son of God
Placed upon that Tree
8 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoCan you find Something New?
A readers critique?
New Days
Once Longing for Unattainable
Now just a Fable
Eternal in a Tear
Infatuated
Temporarily Sated
Moment without Fear
Realize
Euphoria Dies
Dreams Disappear
Dysfunction remains
Labor pains
Transformation
Re-creation
Desperation fades
Sojourner barters
Destiny trades
Wandering charters
New Days
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat is a Quintessential Moment?
6 AnswersWords & Wordplay1 decade agoHow Often - A Poem - Will You Read it and Comment Please?
How Often
How often have I sat in this place?
on this hilltop, overlooking the land below
like a banshee, silently wailing.
My heart cries over the mountain
and happiness is my friend, never far from me
though never near me here.
How often have I missed your face?
An icon, An idol
ingrained in my existence.
Broken empires rebuild again
with new names and rulers
but you are the king of my heart
holding a power over me while we are apart.
How often shall I sing your praises?
For all time, in ecstasy.
Waiting for your hand to touch me
as your words have filled me
even from your far off land
even despite times shifting sand.
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoPoem Regarding a Vivid Dream - Any Comments - and a bonus question!?
(I don't really know anything about formatting a poem, whats free verse, or what is not. Someone said something to me yesterday about L3 or something like that in one of my other poems. I dont know what that means. If when you comment on my poem you would tell me what all that means I would appreciate it. I am a college student but I have only take English Composition so far....nothing about poetry was mentioned. lol Thanks for humoring my naivety....)
Druid Dream
Tiny bells
foreign smells
ancient myst
morning dew kissed
preset time
unending rhyme
runes on stone
stand alone
blazing fires
funeral pyres
mask within mask
dark mystic task
sleepy eyes
night-time dies
morning rises
claim your prizes
druid dream
so it would seem
7 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoPlease Critique My Poem - Called "Drifting"?
Drifting
Looking back
Visions Crystallize
Sight Blurs
Omnipotence
Blindness
Forgotten Self
New Identity
Indecisive
About me
Directions please
On me Knees
Wishing for
An Open Door
Castaway
Barren Beaches stay
Company complicates
Whom are Foes
Or Mates
7 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoA poem About the Snow! Come See?
Moonlit Forest
moonlight
casting her pale shadow
on the never resting
myst
tall moist
evergreens
erect and strong
protecting the forest floor
from the snowflakes
falling softly
leaving an icy kiss
where ever they lay
5 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoDawn at the Humble Tower - A Poem - you like?
My sleepy eyes we reluctant to greet the day today
My body stretched and my muscles protested
The house was cool and my skin goose pimpled
And dawn gently washed away the night with hues of grey
Out the small window the tree skeletons posed and stood guard
My heart lifted up as a deer carefully picked his way through my yard
The fan in the bathroom buzzed out all other sound
But a wonderment of the glory of the day in me began to abound
The warm cloth refreshed my face and heightened my senses
Minty Breath and freshly combed hair made my visage fair
New shoes of black and white made dressing less of a Plight
A touch of red lipstick and mascara made me look just right
Now Master Sun has come to Paint the Day
The Michelangelo of the heavens creating a new display
Letting the colors begin soft and pastel, slowly growing bright
Further Exorcising the memory of dark Night
Feeling a kinship with Alice from the story
Because I have gone through my own looking glass from glory to glory
Nostalgia at the one that made me bigger, and the one that made me small
Gladness that one made me do nothing at all
Ready to leave my castle, my humble tower
I sneak into her room and kiss her, still asleep at such an early hour
One more kiss for my husband, snoring, yet handsome and strong
Then off I go to town, noise, cars, work, schedules, and the general throng
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoApril Insomnia - A poem - Do you see?
April Insomnia
Whispers of Memories
Pull the present from me
Emotions like conflicting waves collide
Shattering into billions of droplets
Like those tears from my eyes
I cant remember you completely anymore
But I still Love you
Irrationally
Despite myself
and you
Here in this place
before Death and Heaven
or Perhaps Death and Hell
I am in wonder at the strange twists of fate
that leave me afraid
My fear is tidal and forceful
And I must swallow it
And press on Faithful
That it is not my will be done
(By: Little Wifey! yay! Poems are fun...)
8 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoInto Where I am - Poem Critique Please?
(I wrote this ...going for less words that say more.) :-)
Into Where I Am
Twilight Eyes
Bravely analyze the Abyss
Riddles and Phraseology
Designed to create a Labyrinth
Or challenge
Dare Ye!
See into my Soul
Perhaps the mysts
Lined with Hidden things
Impersonating the Gates of Avalon
Cover Doorways
A Passage
Not Well Traveled
A moss covered
Stone Corridor
Into a beautiful Land
A Dwelling Place
For that Which is Really
Me
6 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoOne more for the road, and thank you for your encouraging and honest critique?
(I am so pleasantly surprised by the genius and authenticity of the people in this category. I find I am as hungry for criticism as for praise. What a wonderful hidden place!) :-) Here is one more before I go to feed the baby...
The Summer River
Under the cobalt oppression of the sky
I feel the heat pierce my skin
and erode away my precious oils and moisture
White light contradicts sharply with metallic dark
as the ever changing water of the river runs on
through a channel carved by God
The cold depths hide life, and death, and treasure
and lost things
also stealing from my strength
My mouth makes shapes of pleasure
laughter and sarcasm
my tongue betraying my thirst
The day wanes slowly like the moon
and I drift idol in mock thrill
over waves of heat and water
Beauty like that of the dreams of others
rises high and rough, masterfully created
Like a post card, all around me
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoSmall Praise - One more poem I wrote, waddya think?
(I don't know if I am a poet, but I like to write sometimes and I hardly ever share my work. I must be feeling brave today. Or reckless. lol)
Small Praise
Every word and phrase
that has come
from the lips of God
can be used in my many
marvels in tribute to you
I become a poet
when I let my mind focus on you
It is great and I am well favored
your Life intertwined with mine
I curse this world and all its darkness
with vows to sheild you from its evil
and betraying nature
I do not want you to fall
or become disillusioned
I wish to incubate your faith
as a champion in your honor
Maybe I shelter you
please forgive me
perhaps it is only because
for me there was no shelter
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoI wrote a poem for my daughter, what do you think?
(This category is new to me, but I am diggin it...it makes me feel....good.)
The Blessing of this Day Overcomes Me
And if it is the last day before eternity
I have had the greatest joy
Each moment like a gift
to be held on high; treasured
I sing songs for your pleasure in the evening
and my spirits raise to new heights
as your eyes are heavy lidded and soon close
Amazement at the wonder of your Love
Fills my heart
and I burst with warmth
Worries of the day cannot quench this fire
My soul confirms that such things
shall pass away
But I am convinced that I shall know you
in heaven
Such meaning have you given to this life
Such light have you caused to shine
even into the darkest regions of my heart
I am so Thankful to be your Mother
You honor me, my Lovely Daughter
7 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoIf a 14 year old sexually assaulted a 18 or 19 year old who would be charged? What would the charges be?
I did not say weather they were male or female because that should not matter. if you think it does...explain. :-)
This question is just out of curiosity...its fiction.
7 AnswersLaw & Ethics1 decade agoWho else just loves Simon and Paula's antics on American Idol...do you think they are "doin it?"?
lol They have chemistry...if they aren't I wonder if they should? Maybe Simon would be less grumpy!
7 AnswersReality Television1 decade ago