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What Do You Live For?

There are so many different countries and different people with different thinking in the world and people live in their own way in their own positions. And if I am asked what they live for or what is the ultimate goal in life, I would say that we live a life for happiness. Then, what should we have in our lives to be happy? Personally, I suppose there are three main factors that make us lead happy lives.

Firstly, you have to have a family to be happy. Just having a family itself could give you happiness although most people don't realize the fact. From my experience, when I went to Australia for studying, I missed my family and I was really scared and felt sad without any reason, so I called my mother everyday for a month. And then, as time goes by, I could manage everything quite well alone without my family. What I realized there was I could do well without them is because I have my family in Korea. That is, since I know they are just always there for me, I could have confidence whenever I met anyone or I faced something new. For me, my family is my driving force in my life.

Another important factor that makes us happy would be health. What is the use of a very expensive house and a car or success in carrier if you are not healthy? If you come down with a disease or get injured seriously, everything that you previously wanted to accomplish or longed for would be meaningless. When I was 15, my aunt got sick and had herself examined in the hospital

It's known that nobody can get away from karma, well I didn’t. At my first day of school I saw a girl falling of stairs and I laughed because she looked funny. Two weeks later I was running to catch the bus, when my friend called my name I turned to see who was she next thing I know I was lying on the ground with girls around me and blood in my nose yes! I slammed the wall. After, I gathered myself and stood up like nothing was happen then I ran to the bus. It was a terrible thing all I was thinking of in that moment is how that girl felt when she fell on that stairs.

As you can see, karma is a bad thing and it well hunt you as long as you keep making fun of people so don’t be like me so you can avoid bad an embarrassing moment.

It's known that nobody can get away from karma, well I didn’t. At my first day of school I saw a girl falling of stairs and I laughed because she looked funny. Two weeks later I was running to catch the bus, when my friend called my name I turned to see who was she next thing I know I was lying on the ground with girls around me and blood in my nose yes! I slammed the wall. After, I gathered myself and stood up like nothing was happen then I ran to the bus. It was a terrible thing all I was thinking of in that moment is how that girl felt when she fell on that stairs.

As you can see, karma is a bad thing and it well hunt you as long as you keep making fun of people so don’t be like me so you can avoid bad an embarrassing moment.

Have you ever wondered what is pasta and what made of? Pasta is a type of noodle and it's a traditional food in Italy. There are too many different kinds of pasta. The two main types are fresh pasta, and dried pasta.

Typically pasta is made from dough using flour, water and eggs and formed into sheets or various shapes, then cooked and served in any number of dishes. It can be made with flour from other cereals or grains, and eggs may be used instead of water.

Most dried pasta is made from golden semolina flour ground from durum wheat and mixed with water. Fresh pasta was traditionally produced by hand, sometimes with the aid of simple machines, but today many varieties of fresh pasta are also commercially produced by large scale machines, and the products are broadly available in supermarkets.

Finally, I think the previous information are enough to know about pasta and its types.

I think my essay is missing a thesis, prepositional phrases, simile and metaphore

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I think this short paragraph needs a title and a conclusion

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this paragraph supposed to be about cheating :)

The person who betrays their partner and cheats is thought of as a selfish and unappreciative person. One of the most common reasons people cheat is because they feel unappreciated, and look outside their relationship for love and comfort. Another reason is for revenge, when the partner seeks to retaliate by doing the same thing. If a partner can't forgive, they should get out of the relationship. As there is little or no love and affection left.

I think this short paragraph needs a title and a conclusion

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this paragraph supposed to be about cheating :)

The person who betrays their partner and cheats is thought of as a selfish and unappreciative person. One of the most common reasons people cheat is because they feel unappreciated, and look outside their relationship for love and comfort. Another reason is for revenge, when the partner seeks to retaliate by doing the same thing. If a partner can't forgive, they should get out of the relationship. As there is little or no love and affection left.

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Time has a lot of effects on women's and how they act.

And how did time change their personality, interest and their life.

In the 20s man has a lot of choices in jobs he can do whatever he wants. Unlike woman who does not have that much choices. She can just be a homemaker, a cooker or a tailor, and all of that is because in the 20s they did not have that interest in education all what matters is the physical force it is enough to know who to read and write. They needed men who can build houses, made doors, windows and furniture and a lot of things that needed a strong body. So, you can imagine how their lifestyle was. It was hard but so simple at the same time, the man was the one who was responsible for collecting the money, and the woman was the one who was responsible for raising the children. But when the family was so poor the woman had to help her husband by working with him as a cooker or a tailor.

In nowadays with all that have been changed with the technology and machines they do not need the body power; they already have the power and speed. now, they want the brain so, they focus on education. And since they do not want the body power, that helped women in having more choices in work. Technology did not just change the daily work for men and women only, it even changes their lifestyle.