Do you like this song I'm writing?

Please don’t go. Doesn’t my love show? For I really do love you so. Please don’t say goodbye just because I told a lie. Why won’t you love me and just except my apology? For I really do love you and I hope you’ll love me too. I can’t make you stay but I can say that this will be the worst day if you do leave me. Oh, can’t you see? I really do want you to be with me. With all my heart I would do anything to keep us from being apart. Ooooooh.....But, please just go if my love really doesn’t show. But, please just remember me because I will always remember you and I will always love you, too. Well, I guess this is goodbye...Even though I promised I would never again tell you a lie. I'm sorry though that you're just leaving me because you're just not wanting to except my apology.

Walter M- Barbara2008-02-09T10:07:53Z

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The song actually could be pretty good if the music sounds good and fits the song. You must be writing it to a lover that you just broke up with. Or you would like to break ties with a
boyfriend? Am I right? I don't think it will be a happy song, just a blues song. Create songs that's good for the soul.
Then do yourself a favor and go out and find a new soul mate............

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?2016-09-07T08:30:08Z

If I heard what it seemed like then might be I might reply this higher, but it surely appears lovely well, and I consider I might concentrate to it on circumstances... It turns out a bit quick and might most effective be like a a million:30 and such a lot songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... but it surely appears love it might be a well music... Hope I helped...

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cRAZY cHEERLEADER <32008-02-09T08:55:49Z

cool its great that you are writing a song it is realy good you could sell that to a song writer and get tons of money was your inspiration timbalands apoligize it sounds like that song but from a different point of view you should post other songs that you write

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Anonymous2008-02-09T10:46:00Z

It needs some touch ups, but it's really good! Hope I helped

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Shar2008-02-09T08:54:39Z

Well it sounds like a thousand other songs...but am sure you wrote it from your heart. It means something to you and therefore, it is good.

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