Do you like this song I'm writing?

The song actually could be pretty good if the music sounds good and fits the song. You must be writing it to a lover that you just broke up with. Or you would like to break ties with a

boyfriend? Am I right? I don't think it will be a happy song, just a blues song. Create songs that's good for the soul.

Then do yourself a favor and go out and find a new soul mate............

If I heard what it seemed like then might be I might reply this higher, but it surely appears lovely well, and I consider I might concentrate to it on circumstances... It turns out a bit quick and might most effective be like a a million:30 and such a lot songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... but it surely appears love it might be a well music... Hope I helped...

cool its great that you are writing a song it is realy good you could sell that to a song writer and get tons of money was your inspiration timbalands apoligize it sounds like that song but from a different point of view you should post other songs that you write

It needs some touch ups, but it's really good! Hope I helped

Well it sounds like a thousand other songs...but am sure you wrote it from your heart. It means something to you and therefore, it is good.

hm, i like the way you rhymed 'apology' with 'me'.

however, i think that it's too cliche, breaking up songs. but if that's how you want it, then it's cool, it's cool.

PS: i haven't heard your rhythm so i dont know how yr song is but so far, lyrics are okay.

That's cool, it just has too many rhyming words. They don't have to rhyme just make sure they fit with the rhythm.

its reallyy good so far its sounds like a rent songg dhurr hope it turns out well good luck =]

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that is amazingly good!!

rhymes a lot tho

i think that someone already made a song with those lyrics....BUT i might be wrong, so don't worry & I think it's awesome!