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Broken Bat

The sight of water
It was dark and deep
But a puddle in the back of my head

He fell, a tiny splash
Me too young to swim
I screamed her name, I can't remember now

He was almost lost
Forever and ever
Into that dark and deep water

Oh, the eldest,
No good comes from strangers
The future gone, little light to come

I was not there
My parents told me so
A broken wiffle ball bat in the sun



I can't remember
only stories that I know
Falling to the ground

When i woke
My head was sore
To this day i just don't know.

Just one flicker,
As I look back
I can't remember what happened there

Anonymous2008-04-30T19:06:56Z

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i'm lost.