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Gone again...

As the sky darkens
Overgrown weeds sway in the distance
The night air is cool
And as gentle as a whisper
Golden street lamps
Flicker against a cerulean blue sky
And it is quiet once again
Gone is the sound of laughter
And shared conversation
Emotion filled glances
Linger over a steaming cup of coffee
I miss the intensity of your touch
The humor in your eyes
And the curl of your smile
But most of all
I miss
The way that you make me feel
As I sit here reflecting
On a day well spent
I anticipate your return...

Safe journey my love


Temari

Just Be2009-07-05T14:58:01Z

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Beautiful & bittersweet.
It paints a picture of both sweet memory & longing.
What is unsaid but implied, I wish you were not leaving, is what touches me the most.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!

Anonymous2016-11-04T15:26:16Z

My cat's call is Joan. as quickly as I moved into my domicile the carport storage door became open. I closed it. numerous days later i observed a scent. I opened the door and there have been 5 ineffective kittens interior. as quickly as I rotated there became a black cat at my ft. I promised that if she had yet another muddle i could preserve them. She had yet another muddle. All yet one walked off into the wooded area (next to my domicile), all excep one that stayed. She continues to be with me at present. She is now +/- 22 years previous in human words. basically a passing concept

-2009-07-05T15:17:15Z

If your love doesn't swoon after reading this
he's dead!
I found this to be beautiful expression of the moment.
Well done.

ma

Anonymous2009-07-05T14:40:02Z

Beautiful! I love the description and diction and word choice, as well as the vivid adjectives.
Thanks for sharing this awesome poem, and keep writing!