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ok here are 3 poems that i have writen please say what u think of them all or just one any and all opinions are appreciated
1st:
A Frozen Fire
a frozen fire
wanting to break free
blazing inside
but all is hidden
deep beneth the ice
looks like a small ice cube
in a try with others
waiting to be poped out
and set free
to let melt
to let the fire out
2nd and 3rd are to follow
2nd(has no title as of yet)
as the ice melts away
the water from its contents
drips down into the soil
encasing what ever my lie
beneath the cold hard ice
but as the ice begins to fade
new life is found sprouting
up from the soil
flourishing from the remains
of the ice that shielded it
from danger for many years
growing and growing
the life takes new form
almost ready to bloom
and show everyone
the true colors that resides
it may die and wither
but the thick ice
that protected it for
all these years
provided enough time to mature
so when the life springs
to full growth and maturity
for all to see
all will stop
and see great beauty
every one wonders why
it was hidden deep beneath the world
cold and dark
but then one thinks
to soon and it may have
only been as common as a flower
and not as beautiful as a dream
3rd
What is perfect?
perfect is something to
keep me warm
on cold and windy nights
keep me company
on long and boring days
keep me laughing
on those sad hard days
keep me comfortable
on the days when im sore
keep me sane
on the days my family is crazy
keep me living life
on the days it seems like nothing is there
keep me awake
on the long nights we share
keep me amused
on repetitive days
keep me perfect
on the days im not
perfect is all
but so much more
no one knows but its real
and can be found
in the deepest ocean
to the highest tower
and every were in between
for perfect is what we make it
because everything is perfect
may not be for me
may not be for you
but to someone out there
they are perfect
we have to find it to know
4 Answers
- DeeLv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
I especially like the 1st one...the 2nd and 3rd are good too, it's just kinda long =/
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