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ok here are 3 poems that i have writen please say what u think of them all or just one any and all opinions are appreciated

1st:

A Frozen Fire

a frozen fire

wanting to break free

blazing inside

but all is hidden

deep beneth the ice

looks like a small ice cube

in a try with others

waiting to be poped out

and set free

to let melt

to let the fire out

2nd and 3rd are to follow

Update:

2nd(has no title as of yet)

as the ice melts away

the water from its contents

drips down into the soil

encasing what ever my lie

beneath the cold hard ice

but as the ice begins to fade

new life is found sprouting

up from the soil

flourishing from the remains

of the ice that shielded it

from danger for many years

growing and growing

the life takes new form

almost ready to bloom

and show everyone

the true colors that resides

it may die and wither

but the thick ice

that protected it for

all these years

provided enough time to mature

so when the life springs

to full growth and maturity

for all to see

all will stop

and see great beauty

every one wonders why

it was hidden deep beneath the world

cold and dark

but then one thinks

to soon and it may have

only been as common as a flower

and not as beautiful as a dream

Update 2:

3rd

What is perfect?

perfect is something to

keep me warm

on cold and windy nights

keep me company

on long and boring days

keep me laughing

on those sad hard days

keep me comfortable

on the days when im sore

keep me sane

on the days my family is crazy

keep me living life

on the days it seems like nothing is there

keep me awake

on the long nights we share

keep me amused

on repetitive days

keep me perfect

on the days im not

perfect is all

but so much more

no one knows but its real

and can be found

in the deepest ocean

to the highest tower

and every were in between

for perfect is what we make it

because everything is perfect

may not be for me

may not be for you

but to someone out there

they are perfect

we have to find it to know

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  • Dee
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I especially like the 1st one...the 2nd and 3rd are good too, it's just kinda long =/

  • 1 decade ago

    i like the second one better than the first

  • 1 decade ago

    you suck, get a life

  • 1 decade ago

    practice more.

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  • 1 decade ago

    tis crap.

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