ready for my first question?

I think it a pretty interesting topic twist , on your part which really sets it apart from the "normal" rhyming poems. Its about a baby conception right? At least that's what it sounded like to me---anyway, it puts a kind of self amusing twist on the normal rhyming topics, it sounds to me almost like a kind of inside joke, almost like your actually laughing at---well, well at everyone. Like your laughing at the reader, yourself, the characters, the situation...EVERYTHING! But mostly this poem was enjoyable because of that underlying 'joke' that's what it "feels" like your doing. But i really ike it keep it up!

That danger mouse think he the rodent celebrity type guy. Huh I say huh huh huh little rat faced faced cheese eater. Very good song mr Kurt but too much about rat face.

I write song for you

All together now123

Mr Kurt a he write me a song

It so good i award him a gong

Even though he mention the mouse

I burn rat face out of his house

dangermouse he is a poossy

I hope that this you can see

All the hero stuff on TV

It was really done by me.

see is good song for killing vermin type rodent, egotistical, rat face bastards and then pinning their ratty little hides to a barn door.

Beneath the moon

The looney goon

And his raccoon

Will spoon in June

To a different tune

Munching macaroons

Keeping a weather eye peeled

For the doggerel catcher

Elvis has left the building.

Yuk Yuk Yuk

Its different then alot of poems Ive read. I like it though.

Kurt Has left us hurt

his wit is like a diamond bit

it is a pity it hits mud

not granite...

you can do much better than than that...

now, drop and give me fifty, you intellectual pus*sy...

Did anyone ever tell you, you are Special.

Great poem, but something about it Bugs me.

this poem could be enjoyed more by the bugs