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The End, Thoughts welcome?
it hurts when my eyes are open,
it hurts when they are closed,
i hate my life, there's no relief,
i just keep on living with this curse.
my heart, i know its beating,
but i don't feel alive,
i feel like theres nothing there,
like i'm hollowed out inside.
I'm all alone here,
on this f**ked up earth,
I don't know what to do,
with every second it just gets worse.
someone, please,
just here my cry,
i need help,
i want to die.
I've been screaming for awhile,
but noone seems to hear,
Sh!t on this empty feeling,
staying alive is all i fear.
and I'm ready to leave,
i'm done with my life,
so with this poem,
I'm going to say goodbye.
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Damn Kara, you are so talented, I am proud you are my little sister. I wrote this next poem thinking about you. It isn't about you but you influenced it just the same. Read the poem and then you'll know. I love you little sis.
Your big brother,
Steve
- 1 decade ago
You are a really good poet. Please don't do that to yourself, It would be a waste of talent. I wrote a poem about that, just to write one, and my mother almost killed me (not literal of course) she just watches close because she cares. If you do fell that way notify someone, but it is an amazing poem! I really like it. I am not a fan of free verse so that is awesome coming from me. post more poetry! =)
Autumn
- 1 decade ago
This is really good.You have a talent and im sure id enjoy reading more of your work. I love the words you used to make some of your points... just made my hearts jump out of my chest!
great job =]]
