The End- Please give me some feedback? PLEASE??

Tired subject, not bad writing, but it's so overdone, most people tire quickly and don't finish reading.

Feel bad

wanta die

bye bye cruel world.

too much adieu about nothing

Try to find a new subject, love, hate, and death have become too commonplace. Rather than dealing with the death aspect, try dealing with the afterlife, the freedom, the joys of your spirit floating around the universe, exploring new and wondrous things... or such.

Please don't say goodbye! Find someone else to talk to, adult at school (teacher, counselor...), go to a local mental health clinic, talk to the parent of a friend, call a church and tell them it's important you talk to someone about a crisis situation.

Your life is important. Don't throw it away. Email me at yahoo. I'll listen. You are important, even if those around you can't see it. Could they're so messed up themselves they are not able to see that or to help you. Find some to listen. Don't give up, scream a little louder and longer.

there is another answer and this one will not hurt so bad, Just

look up and say Lord Jesus please help me. he loves you and he is always there to help someone who calls on him. you could never have a greater friend than Jesus.I know this is supposed to be a poem, but you could never write something like that, and not be facing those feelings your self