a poem, i wrote today ,on love?

That is really really good, in fact it's great!

You forgot to jot down your spouse a poem!? XD it fairly is one i stumbled on from the internet,purely exchange it up alittle bit in case you desire. My Princess, My spouse For My costly spouse, in this accepted Day; I Write You This Poem, In my very very own particular way. i wanted to tell you, In words Of my very very own; you are the main helpful man or woman, That i've got Ever prevalent. you are the Prettiest lady, Than Any i've got considered; Your physique Is perfect, So slender And Lean. Your Eyes Have that flicker, That i won't be in a position to stay devoid of; at some point devoid of Them, and that i could Die there is not any doubt. and that i purely Lose administration, whilst i glance At Your Hair; those Curls are purely marvelous, So suitable And uncommon. you are the main worrying man or woman, That i've got Ever Met; there is not any one such as you, and that i'm able to guess. What attracts Me the main, Is Your candy and form touch; you're a modern-day despatched From Heaven, and that i like You a lot. So carry Me As close, As you in all danger can; 'reason Now And constantly, i'm Your guy.

Beautiful

You are wandering too much. You need to stick to one subject. It does show a lot of promise, however. Also, you need to decide what form your poem will take. Study the different forms and rhythms and stay cohesive in your thoughts. It must have a beginning, a middle and an end...just the way life is. Tell a story.

i love your poem and send it in to the publishers

this is really good, not a question