Wording Suggestions Please?

Question

I need help making up a saying to attach to our wedding favors.  For our favors we are making chocolates in the shapes of ribbons in the colors of the cancers which have affected both our mothers.

Our main color is navy blue but red and green are also in my fiance's tartan.

Pink, brides mom, breast cancer
Pearl, grooms mom, lung cancer
Gray, grooms mom, brain cancer (she passed away because of this)

I would quite like it to rhyme.  Thanks for any suggestions.

Soon to be Mrs. Welsh · Accepted Answer

On this day we say "I Do"
We celebrate our mothers too
Our special gifts to you today
Are ribbons Pink, Pearl, and Gray


That was quite a challenge, I also really like the 1st persons Idea also...hope you find something that works for you!

nytengayle13 · Answer

i am sorry i don't have a poem, i just wanted to say that i think what you are doing is beautiful!  i have never heard of anyone doing this before.  you and your fiance's mom's are blessed to have such thoughtful and loving children.  so far the two poems are fantastic, it will be hard to choose!  God bless you both and have a wonderful marriage!

lala · Answer

oh the one above me by kdmum is beautiful!!

Congratulation on your up and coming wedding and your idea for your favours is so special and wonderful.

Take good care and be happy and healthy in your marriage and future lives together.

Sorry I coudn't help re a poem (I'm not very good at that)..but I do think the above is perfect:-)

AussieLady 58 · Answer

For all the people cancer has touched in our lives,
For all the people that in our hearts abides,
Take this favor ribbon shaped ,with you, 
So you can remember them as we do!


Hows that?

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