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a silly little poem i just wrote?

childhood

years washed in a silent tide

awoke to a tuned silence

mind empty of humanities keep

content dreams and deep sleep

playground memories for evermore

Halloween from door to door

toys that spoke

minds imagination evoke

remember the child

our toys spoke

warm sheets and silent night

new horizon with eyes shut

desperation then but a seed

freed once ,tied down ,the sky bleeds

now im grown and things have changed

i wanted love but it rained

desperation no more but a seed

like the rest i found

cigarettes and weed

back to basics and i learn

love lost found never to return

burn and burn and never learn

love brings a new horizon

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Thats not a silly poem its fantastic, thanks for posting it i like it.

    Source(s): James
  • 1 decade ago

    I doubt that it was a poem you just wrote, there's obvious thought and work that went into this and also there is a lack of grammar and stealth used in your pitch, fine work but needs retouching.

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    whilst its previous due into the night and the moon places out his blanket waiting to sleep i lay unsleeping & watch those twinkle stars fall slowly into the night sky i dream of the celebrities i dream for the dreamers i lament for mom's nature & earth and desire the solar will upward push superb & sparkling whilst morning comes

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    nice

    maybe spelling line 2

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  • 1 decade ago

    Nice writing ..keep it up..thanks for sharing all.

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    Wow =]

    Thats Good

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  • 1 decade ago

    (clap) (clap) (calp),, interesting peom.... lovely by the way...

  • 1 decade ago

    wow its really great .... it has deep meaning...

  • 1 decade ago

    its great

  • 1 decade ago

    way kool!!!

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