What do you think of this sonnet?

It says so many things when we compare it to that of R Frost.... So B- to you...

its a good first draft! the word orders could use a lot of work though cause the rhythm is a little off. you have the sylables right and the rhyme scheme right for the most part but the stressed unstressed pattern is a bit rough. if youre going for the shakespearian sonnet it should go unstressed-stressed in five sets (iambic pentameter) like -/ -/ -/ -/ -/. so allow me to rearange some stuff.... its just a suggestion anyway

Two roads diverge upon the yellow wood.

Never again I'll pass the trodden rock.

Nor will I stay on forked road I once stood.

Where grass is grown anew my soul will dock.

Untrodden ways, they said, they bear no fruit.

This phrase unto me they had wholely warned.

That for the dreamers life it pays no tribute.

Aspiring to gamble leaves you torn.

What gain is there in life when yield is certain?

When fruit is bountiful, it rots and wastes.

What gain when fruits are rising without famine?

Where fruit is not fruit, sweetness lost its taste.

“It bears no fruit”, I gaze upon the path.

Will I make it bear fruit or God’s wrath?

mostly its just the rhythm that needs masaging, but the content and the feel are great! keep up the good work!

EDIT: waste vs wastes isnt really that big of a deal to rhyme, i was just trying to match the verb tense with rots. you have a few slant rhymes in here which are almost rhymes, but im not so much for having absolute rhymes everywhere as a rule. the most important thing for a sonnet is the flow, even shakespear himself gave himself a little wiggle room with sylables and rhymes. read a couple of shakespears sonnets outloud and youll hear the rhythm flow pretty quickly, then try reading yours outloud to feel its rhythm. this usually helps me out.

EDIT 2:

in response to the other answer, yes poetic license is always a must, and no you shouldnt always follow the rules, but rules are there for a reason, and if youre going to try to write something in a form which others have been writing in for centuries, then the rules do matter. if you dont want to write in that form, then fine, but dont pretend you are. but to just say rules dont matter at all and you shouldnt ever follow them is somewhat childish...

rules in poetry help prevent others from making good poemes (poetry). When you write don't go by the rules. Poetry is what you think of it no matter what others say. It's freedom of speech.

This was good so plz write more just remember to write with out rules.

Have a good day.

lovely.

thx for sharing.