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Screwdriver asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this poem?

To my journal I write

“Lifetime torments, lifetime dreams”

I had a dream last night

I thought, “My sleep always brings dreams”

Two weeks, pursue I might

“I could, but only fools know dream”

Three years, I saw false light

“No time, my life fulfilled, to dream”

Ten years, regret in sight

“What if? Maybe too late to dream”

Today my hair turned white

“Age knows, wisdom dares not to dream”

The day my soul took flight

“I sought, but now death sees no dreams”

I had nightmares last night

It said, “Go and follow your dreams.”

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Its different from alot of stuff I have read. I personally like poems in which dreams are involved, so bravo!

  • 1 decade ago

    Interesting!

  • 1 decade ago

    Wow, different!

    A life story as told through the attitude toward

    and experience in dreaming.

    A little difficult to follow the sense if it is to

    be read to an audience.

  • 1 decade ago

    well this poem is unique.

    but i'm kinda confused with the line 'no time, my life fulfilled, to dream'

    do you mean what you wrote or are you trying to say 'no time to dream, with my life fulfilled'. that's just it.

    but overall, this poem is great

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :'-( tuteeeeeee lol i love it!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    nice one ;)

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