I wrote this, its kinda dark.....how good/bad is it?

HHHHMMMMM. I see a lot of poetential but your ideas are too...too....what's the word? Fluctuate? flighty? fickle? I don't know but it's not consistent. The last stanza is the best and can actually stand alone as a poem by itself. Are you just ranting and raving your thoughts about your life and life in general? I can't really grade this becus it's not good but it's not bad either. Read some other people's poetry and see what makes theirs successful and then go back to the drawing board....

Say what you like a speedy and kinda stupid write or according to threat an difficulty-free nursery rhyme Say it only for exciting or write it with a heavy coronary heart each and every of the memories,new and previous each and every of the loopy issues you`ve completed So the alternative continues to be one Say what you like Write what you like.

I like sounds good to me is it true if so dont be down on how or what people do to you just continue to grow and like you for you.The world is a cold place be the sun.

i like it. i write alot of poetry, n all of mine seems to turn out kinda, well, kinda depressing when im done. hahah.but hey, ya no, u write whats on ur mind. newys. i like it alot. its really good.

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listen to some upbeat music. stop listening to emo. and why would u want attention? who cares what ppl think of u?

very nice, you have some talent in ya girl!

Spell check, please. I see this more as your thougths at a certain time.....not really much of a poem. Sorry:(