Moon made me write a new thing. Is it good?

Moon as in the sun's girlfriend? or Moon as in me? haha =)

--->Yes it's good...simple yet has a lasting effect on the reader!

EDIT: I really love the last line, "Embrace her"

Hey, I like this one. Not only are you a good writer or poetry, but you have the soul of a romantic. Does that still backfire on you like last year when you took up with that waitress from that bar in Pigsknuckle Arkansas? Hope your wife did not find out how she stalked you through 3 states.

Do not chase her

Let her rest at your side

When she is weary, teary eyed

Let her watch the embers rising

So surprising, how the glow

Flows deep inside her

Can confide in her

Take pride in her

Moolight maiden

Certainly got you mooning

You are a vert talented individual! Did you locate the waitress?

Very good in deed' but i think everything you write is great ' and i really mean it.,

Very sweet and simple and I love it!

Very romantic =)

aww... shucks. I did not know you and Moonbelle... well, you know...

yes it is good...