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mbw m asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 1 decade ago

please correct my grammar. How do I revise this paragraph?

Jenna is a kind of girl that loves the outdoor, hunting, fishing, riding four wheelers, and horses. She is a country girl at heart; she has a natural girl next door look, but love to explore new concepts & looks. She has experience in print advertising and promotions, plus TV shows and movies.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Jenna loves the outdoors; she enjoys hunting, fishing, riding horses and four-wheeling. She is a country girl at heart. Altough she has a natural 'girl next door' look, she loves to experiment with new concepts and looks. She has experience in print advertising and promotions, plus TV shows and movies.

  • lulu
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Jenna is a kind of girl who loves the outdoor, hunting, fishing, as well as riding four wheelers and horses. She is a country girl at heart; she has a natural girl-next-door look but loves to explore new concepts and looks. She has experience in print advertising and promotions, plus TV shows and movies.

  • 1 decade ago

    Jenna is a kind of girl that loves the outdoors, and love to hunt, fish, ride a four wheelers and horses. She is a country girl at heart and she has a natural girl next door look and loves to explore new concepts & looks. She has experience in print advertising and promotions, TV shows and movies.

  • 1 decade ago

    Jenna is the kind of girls that love going out, hunting, fishing, riding four wheelers, and horses. She is a country girl a hear. She has a natural girl-next-door look, but loves to explore the world. She's experienced in printing advertisements and promotions, and also in TV shows and movies.

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  • 1 decade ago

    More emphasis on style, as always.

    Jenna is the outdoors kind of girl, who loves hunting, fishing, horse-riding and driving four-wheelers. She is a country girl at heart, and has that defining girl-next-door-look. All this said, she thoroughly enjoys exploring new concepts and looks. She has experience in print advertising and promotions and has dabbled in TV shows and movies as well.

  • 1 decade ago

    jenna is the kind of girl who loves the outdoor, hunting, fishing, riding horses and car. she is a country girl at heart, she has the girl next door, natural look but loves to explore new concepts and views. she has an experience in printing advertisements, promotions, TV shows and movies.

  • 1 decade ago

    Jenna is a girl who loves outdoor activities more-hunting, fishing, riding, and driving. Although a country girl at heart, she has next-door neighbourly looks. She is fashionable and likes experimenting with her appearance. She is working commercial artist.

  • 1 decade ago

    The first answer is partly right. "Jenna is the kind of girl that loves the outdoors;" (semi-colon).

    "She has experience in print advertising . . ." is correct. The "an" that the first answer put in does not belong there.

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