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What do you guys think about the poem I had to write for my education class?

I am M. Calhoun future Science teacher

Teaching thinking to the tethered targets

Of the state’s sundry suffering, to open the markets

Of the mental faculties of the student’s minds

Despite their hatred for being in the binds

Of despairing society.

I am seeking to find a way

To end their torture from day to day

Of the confines of the ignorant bliss

That is so permissive in this worldly mist

Of media Science that has left the mark

Of truthful meaning that was never wrought.

I will show the students that truth exists

In many forms and to question the mixt.

I am M. Calhoun future Science teacher.

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  • DrIG
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I think that it is very good./

  • 1 decade ago

    lines 2 thru 5 are a little much. maybe if you can modify them to match the tone of the rest of it. I am sure you can. "tethered targets"? hey i am not a whiz or a poet. just giving my 2 cents worth. i am sure you are perfectly capable.

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