What do you think of this poem? I wrote it myself?

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I only hope for a love that is true,
That some romance will want to fly my way.
I just can't believe I'm getting so blue,
Over something dumb like Valentine's Day.

Hearts will be floating in the school day air,
And our students will go on couple mode,
Will this day lead us to someone who cares,
Or leas us down the dark, heart-broken road?

Cupid broke my ol' heart so many times,
That I'm not sure it will ever be healed.
But I'll contuine to write these sad rhymes,
To express that I care a great deal.

I hate that I just keep falling in love,
Valentine's Day is not sent from above.

Poetry · Accepted Answer

Reminds me of
"better to have loved and lost,  then never to have loved at all"

and the song "Love is a lonely hunter"

No, Valentines Day isn't sent from above, it's here, and it's all around. 
your poem is good, speaks to many who have had hearts hurt. A hug will do wonders tho!

thanks for sharing.
/hugs
Poetry

christinachaos(: · Answer

Wow that's really good!! Usually how I feel on Valentines Day.

~Usagi · Answer

ANTI VALENTINES DAY! lol...sorry...just had to do that....really good and i usually love valentines but my heart got broken recently...so thats how i feel towards valentines day too.....

+:GoodLife78+ · Answer

i like it. You had a few parts where it didn't rhyme or out of verse, work on it a bit. You're talented! Sadly, i think i agree with the theme..:&#92;

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What do you think of this poem? I wrote it myself?

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